Poetry corner …

 

The sound of my heart pounding
In my head
Beats relentlessly

 

Pushing air into my reluctant lungs
Pulsing blood into my flattened veins 

I hear the echo of your voice
A trail of vapor
Vanishing into the lonely night

 

fOIS In The City

 

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Photograph by JenG 
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3 responses to “Poetry corner …

  1. christicorbett

    Loved your word choices with this one. They, combined with the picture, create a sense of longing.

    Very nice.

    Hope all is well,

    Christi Corbett
    http://christicorbett.wordpress.com

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  2. laradunning

    I hear the echo of your voice
    A trail of vapor
    Vanishing into the lonely night

    Oh lovely…have to say that outloud to get the full effect. Touching poem. Thanks for sharing.

    Like

  3. themommyvan

    Love this poem. Perfect in it’s simplicity. Beautiful in relaying that sensation…

    Like

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