The sound of my heart pounding
In my head
Beats relentlessly
Pushing air into my reluctant lungs
Pulsing blood into my flattened veins
I hear the echo of your voice
A trail of vapor
Vanishing into the lonely night
fOIS In The City
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Photograph by JenG
Loved your word choices with this one. They, combined with the picture, create a sense of longing.
Very nice.
Hope all is well,
Christi Corbett
http://christicorbett.wordpress.com
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I hear the echo of your voice
A trail of vapor
Vanishing into the lonely night
Oh lovely…have to say that outloud to get the full effect. Touching poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Love this poem. Perfect in it’s simplicity. Beautiful in relaying that sensation…
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